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14th Mar 2012, 12:00 AM in Chapter One: Shit Happens

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14th Mar 2012, 12:00 AM

OnlyFoolsAndVikings

So this was fun to ink, but not so much fun to paint. But it turned out pretty good in the end and I have no major problems with it. I didn't make it very clear what was happening though(but then, maybe that was my plan all along~) basically Quin, using speshul Mind Powahs, ripped one of the smelting machines from it's base and made it fall onto the ground in front/on top of the guards... I think.

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it's kind of really bad that I have to say that. But that's all fixed up in the pages for chapter two (because oh my god, this chapter is ending in two weeks from today! Can you believe it!?)

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14th Mar 2012, 12:05 AM

KingRandom

5th panel face!

(Yes I can believe it)

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14th Mar 2012, 7:18 AM

OnlyFoolsAndVikings

Best face ever

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14th Mar 2012, 12:10 AM

Uglulyx

The expression in panel 5. O.o

Also, so many panels!

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14th Mar 2012, 7:18 AM

OnlyFoolsAndVikings

hahahah pannels. Yes, that's kind of a thing for me, shove as muchinformation into one page because it has to be worth a week's wait.

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14th Mar 2012, 12:34 AM

Kim Allman

This was a great page. Layout, expressions, color, action, were all wonderful, and yes, what is going on is very clear. You did not need to explain anything. In fact I am of the opinion that a writer should not explain everything and give their reader the benefit of being able to extrapolate information. If things are not working your audience will let you know. ;)

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14th Mar 2012, 7:20 AM

OnlyFoolsAndVikings

Ok good, D: I was super worried it didn't make sense because these pages were all a bit shoddy being the first.

Ha I'll try not to tell them next time.

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14th Mar 2012, 12:47 AM

KingRandom

...also I'm watching Russell Brand, and it just struck me how much he looks like Quin (only with a beard)

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14th Mar 2012, 7:21 AM

OnlyFoolsAndVikings

ewwwwwwwwwwwwww Oh man, just sayin', but Quin is waaaaaaay better than that guy. :U If you look up Benedict Cumberbatch from BBC's Sherlock, you'll see where the likeness comes from :I

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14th Mar 2012, 1:31 AM

cattservant

Again her mind is blown
by Powers unknown...
Pop goes the rivet!!!*

*Action & Mystery. Thank you very much indeed!

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14th Mar 2012, 7:21 AM

OnlyFoolsAndVikings

Mind blowing happens a lot in this and the next chapter, its fucking crazy broooooooooooooooo

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14th Mar 2012, 1:50 AM

Invader.Socks

Use the Force, Quin! Use the Force!

This comic is like drugs. Sweet, sweet, water-colored drugs. You'd better be making a print version when you get enough pages. :I

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14th Mar 2012, 7:22 AM

OnlyFoolsAndVikings

The Force is right ahaha

Print version? Oh man, that'll be a looooooooooooonnnnng time coming. But I am thinking about it.

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14th Mar 2012, 3:16 AM

ekami

I think it's pretty clear~ If you wanted to make it more obvious, though, you could have done a shot from further away, showing the machine and the men, and then the same shot with the machine where the men were? o-o

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14th Mar 2012, 7:23 AM

OnlyFoolsAndVikings

cooooool, thanks for the suggestion! :D I'll keep that in mind for later on.

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14th Mar 2012, 3:54 AM

Kanela

I looove your watercoloriiiiiiing!!!!!!!
and of course, how the story is coming along uuuuuh, so good!

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14th Mar 2012, 7:24 AM

OnlyFoolsAndVikings

Thaaaaaaaaankyoooooooouuuuuuuuu Glad you're enjoying both aspects!

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14th Mar 2012, 4:14 AM

Meed

And his magical power is revealed!

*rocks in seat*

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14th Mar 2012, 7:24 AM

OnlyFoolsAndVikings

There's more where that's coming from ;D

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14th Mar 2012, 4:34 AM

(DE)(AD)

Oh. Oh my goodness yes.

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14th Mar 2012, 7:25 AM

OnlyFoolsAndVikings

shit. is. going. down.

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14th Mar 2012, 5:29 AM

skorpen

Your facial expressions are the best!

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14th Mar 2012, 7:25 AM

OnlyFoolsAndVikings

:D Thank you! I try C:

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14th Mar 2012, 6:53 AM

Kim Allman

Quin is at least to my mind an anti-hero archetype. A tall (very tall), dark and handsome bad boy and I wonder what his intentions are with our heroine.

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14th Mar 2012, 7:26 AM

OnlyFoolsAndVikings

haha, he is certainly an anti-hero, but his intentions with Cassie, well is thinking about the same thing...

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14th Mar 2012, 6:58 AM

CyberSkull

"Oh My GOD!"

More or less the stock response to finding yourself in "An ADVENTURE!" (at least it helps to think of it as one).

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14th Mar 2012, 7:27 AM

OnlyFoolsAndVikings

OH MY GOD

hahah standard teenage girl response, I did want her to go "Holy shit!" but that was a bit too comical and idk I don't want to swear tooooo much in this comic :I

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14th Mar 2012, 7:00 AM

Doomy

Oho ~

Sexy powers are sexy.

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14th Mar 2012, 7:27 AM

OnlyFoolsAndVikings

ain't nothing sexier than moving objects with your mind.

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14th Mar 2012, 8:38 AM

Loungegecko

This comic makes me think of the back story of Amnesia.

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14th Mar 2012, 8:43 AM

OnlyFoolsAndVikings

I see no creepy castle of vagina face monsters

yet.

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15th Mar 2012, 4:09 AM

killersteak

Panel five is a rape face..... He's so gonna rape her.

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15th Mar 2012, 7:45 AM

OnlyFoolsAndVikings

man every one is thinking that

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15th Mar 2012, 12:55 PM

killersteak

Therefore it must be true? Like Santa?

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31st Aug 2012, 3:12 AM

Beelzebabe

I want to make two puppets of these characters and smash them together while repeating "KISS KISS KISS".

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